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Offline katblu42

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The Two Years Between
« on: November 20, 2016, 21:34:46 CST »
My first fan fic.

I'll be posting it on Archive of Our Own soon too.

Comments (particularly encouraging ones) are most welcome!
« Last Edit: November 24, 2016, 00:08:17 CST by katblu42 »

Offline Ebonyswanne

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Re: The Two Years Between
« Reply #1 on: November 21, 2016, 01:14:35 CST »
Great reflections, you feel over the story the foreboding of the war ahead, the intel, and a new enemy along the loss of a team member. Some anguish, but that's Gatchaman! Great to see you stepping out and posting your story. Well done.  :)
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Re: The Two Years Between
« Reply #2 on: November 23, 2016, 22:13:52 CST »
Beautifully written! Love the depth at which you explored their individual characters! The time between wars has always been such a mystery. So glad to see you sharing with us. Keep up the great work!

Offline katblu42

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Re: The Two Years Between
« Reply #3 on: November 24, 2016, 00:04:50 CST »
Thanks ladies!

It's now up on Archive of Our Own too - complete with a few tweaks after further beta reading from GrumpyGhostOwl.